Another short…

NOT what I’m supposed to be writing, blaming this one on Lawdog…

Strong language alert! Comments appreciated, as always.

Sean ‘Mac’ McCampbell walked slowly down the hallway toward his next class, watching the two young girls in front of him. Another month or so, and they’ll be back in summer dresses and shorts. I love summer in the south! He cocked his head as he heard one of them say, “Well, I don’t know. I know Prof Hue is saying people will get extra credit on April first for attending the protests downtown. There’s supposed to be something outrageous planned.”

The other girl laughed. “You just want to meet up with that boy that does the coordination again.”

“Well, he is cute. And he’s a psyche major! But that’s not for another month, so…well, I’ve got to get my grades up. My parents are on my ass about last quarter.”

“So, no protesting for you for a month? Is that…it won’t cost you points in the prof’s class?”

Mac turned into the classroom for middle eastern history. He sighed. At least this puts a check in the block for my Ph.D. He flopped into his normal seat at the back of the room and absently scratched his left foot. Why is it I have phantom limb pain after all this time? And why the hell does it go away if I scratch that proverbial itch? Shit wasn’t supposed to continue.

As the professor droned on, Mac’s mind wandered back to what the girls were talking about. He’d been keeping a low profile ever since his acceptance in the Linguistics Ph.D program at Texas, not really associating with any of the other candidates or most of the people on campus. Part of that was PTSD, and part was that he was fifteen years older than most of them. I don’t get the rioting and the lack of police presence, or the hands off stance. I know that’s not coming from the governor, he’s called in the guard and DPS on more than one occasion. And it’s cutting into my drinking at my favorite bar on 6th street too.

The professor was expounding on the differences between Wahhabism and Sunni Islam and getting it wrong. Mack raised his hand languidly, and the professor looked over. “Yes, Mr…McCampbell? You have a comment?”

“Yes, Ma’am. You are incorrect. Wahhabism is the ultra-conservative version of Islam, pushed by the House of Saud for…I think, one hundred-fifty years now. They are the…official, for lack of a better word, religion of Saudi Arabia. Wahhabi imam’s goala are nothing less than the complete subversion of the mainstream Sunni version with a complete return to monotheism.”

“Oh really? And what makes you an expert, Mr. McCampbell?”

“I grew up there. I’ve read and studied the Koran. I saw the lifestyle from nineteen ninety up through two thousand three. I’ve traveled extensively with my parents throughout the whole region. I graduated from Gymnasium there in two thousand two. And I visited that area extensively from two thousand seven to two thousand seventeen. Iraq, Afghanistan, and a few other places.”

The professor sniffed. “Well, that’s not what my references say. So, I would like to continue without interruption, if I may.”

Mac nodded and slumped back in his seat, drifting off again. I thought last year was bad, but…the election…just turned the BS up to eleven. I need one more year to have my Ph.D, and I’m outta here. He tuned out the rest of the lecture, got up when the bell rang and collected his notes.

***

Later that evening, as he sat at the bar at Stubbs, the bartender leaned across the bar. “You a vet?” Mac nodded, and he continued, “Wondered. You act like one, but don’t have the tats or a beard, and you’re older than the normal crowd. And you’re a careful drinker.”

Mac smiled. “Habit. Never been big on getting stupid drunk. And I like BBQ. Didn’t get much of that growing up. If we were lucky, once a year when we came home. My dad loved Stubbs in Lubbock, tells stories about the bands he saw there.”

“That’s a shame.” The bartender stuck a hand across the bar. “Roger Ellington. Thirty First MEU, Marines. Got out in twenty-fifteen.”

He shook the hand as he replied, “Mac McCampbell, started out in the Army, First Seventy-Fifth, went off and did some other shit, out in twenty-eighteen on a medical.”

Roger laughed. “Other shit? Didn’t we all do that at one point?” he swiped the bar rag over a non-existent spot. “You ready for another beer, on the house?”

“I’ll wait on the food, if you don’t mind. How’s the bartending business?”

Roger shrugged. “Pays the bills. Going to school at the U. Eye candy is pretty good in this job, or was…” He looked around then added, “This whole protest BS is killing us. And the girls that come in now are…” he shuddered. “Boss doesn’t like it, but I’ve been carrying for almost a year now. We’ve been lucky so far, but I told him I’ll be damned if I’m gonna let some idiot come in and trash the place or hurt our customers. Thankfully, they’ve stayed mostly on Sixth Street.”

Mac nodded. “If it comes to that, just don’t do a Jake Gardner.”

“Oh hell no. I knew people that knew him in the Corps. Still questions about that whole deal. He was innocent, plain and simple. Lot of his friends are still pissed.” A pretty little waitress came out carrying a tray. “That goes over here, Mindy, thanks!”

She smiled and slid it in front of Mac. “Enjoy your meal, sir.”

Mac sighed. “Sir?” Then smiled at her. “Thanks, Mindy.” She pranced off, both the men enjoying the view. Mac finished his BBQ and the free beer, then headed back to his apartment well away from campus.

Logging onto his computer, he debated working on his Ph.D thesis, decided against it, and started cruising the internet, checking his usual sites. He dipped into some of the backchannel mil sites. I’ve been out for almost three years and still want to know what is going on. I guess once intel always intel… One of the sites had a post from FoG about taking back the cities. He read it, cocking his head. That’s…somebody that…sounds familiar. He/she/it is talking about basic vigilante justice. But…considering the number of DAs and police chiefs that have abrogated their responsibilities. Doing things on the down low, sneaky Pete style.

Then he remembered seeing a Stingray set up behind Sixth Street. Getting up, he went to his closet and drug out a trunk he’d buried in the back. Digging through it, he pulled out an 800Mhz packet radio and rubber duck antenna. Inserting the battery, he thought. I wonder…dammit, battery’s dead. Charger, what did I, ah ha! He plugged the charger in stuck the battery in it, and went back to surfing the net. He found a number of camera locations, printed out a map of the entertainment district, and started marking them on the map. Flipping over to the late news, he saw that there was yet another ‘protest’ in the entertainment district that was just heating up, and he decided to pay them a visit.

Mapping his way in and out to avoid cameras, he got within line of sight of the Stingray unit, turned his laptop on, and connected the packet radio to it. He did a search and found what he figured was the unit. Now to see if the back door is still open… He pinged it via the packet radio and got an answering ping. Biting his tongue, he entered an alphanumeric string and a command and sent it. The screen popped up and he thought, Yes! That time with the agency in the ‘Stans pays off once again! He sent the dump command and sat back, knowing it would take at least fifteen minutes to get whatever was on the unit. He sat back and watched through the windshield as people walked by the parking lot, keeping his eye out for anyone weaving through the cars or busting windows. A ding told him the download was complete and he quickly logged out, turned the radio off, and disconnected it, sliding everything back into his backpack.

***

Sunday night, a tired and scruffy Mac leaned back in his chair, stretched and felt his back pop. Gah, this is worse than…hell, ain’t nobody shooting at me, so it’s not that bad. He shut the computer off, took a shower, and threw the weekend’s dirty dishes in the dishwasher. Food. I need food. Pappadeaux for seafood. That works! He pulled into the parking lot a half hour before they closed and grabbed a seat at the corner of the bar where he could see the door. He ordered quickly, and sipped a beer as he waited for the seafood to come out. Conversations swirled around him, and he caught bits and pieces of the conversations. They seemed to center around the riots in various cities and the lack of response to them. There was an underlying sense of frustration and anger that caused the hairs on the back of his neck to stand up.

As he was waiting on the bill, he looked up at the TV showing the local news. The talking head was saying that one girl was blinded by lasers and another that had been beaten with a baseball bat had just died. Mac had to work to keep the monster down as he started seeing red. The waitress delivered his bill and backed away fearfully, “Are you okay, sir?”

Mac pointed to the TV. “Just saw that the…protesters blinded one girl and killed another down on Sixth Street. I’m…sorry. Not mad at you, just that this…crap is being allowed.”

He saw tears in her eyes as she said tumultuously, “That’s why I’m afraid to go out at night, and my brother picks me up from here. I’m…probably going to quit. I’m…scared!” He handed her enough for the bill and a nice tip, patted her on the shoulder and walked out the door before he said anything else.

By Thursday, he’d had enough of classes and being cooped up in the apartment and decided to go back to Stubbs. He made sure he had his LTC in his billfold, along with his driver’s license and retired ID, then loaded his 1911 and slipped it in his holster, then clipped a double mag carrier on his left side. This is…so much bullshit. He shook his head, but picked up his sawed off Mossberg and walked quickly to his truck, holding the shotgun under his coat. Once he got in, he slipped it under the seat, making sure it was readily available.

Twenty minutes later, he parked on the street in front of Stubbs. Looking carefully around, he slid out and walked quickly into the bar. Sitting at the bar, he waited for service for a few minutes, and finally caught a waitress’ eye. “No bartender tonight?”

She glanced around. “Um, Roger’ll be right here. I can’t serve you, but I’ll go get him.”

“Thanks.” He pulled a menu over, wondering why he even bothered looking, since he always got the brisket plate. Roger finally walked out of the back and around the bar like a zombie. He looked up and Mac saw that his eyes were red. “You okay, Man?”

Roger coughed, rubbed his eyes, and looked up at the ceiling, letting out a long breath. “No, I’m not, but there ain’t shit I can do.” He pulled a Shiner out of the cooler, slid a coaster over and set the beer on it. “You remember Mandy?”

Mac stopped with the beer halfway to his mouth. “Yeah?”

“She’s…she’s been fucking blinded. And her friend, Lissa, was killed Friday night. The other girl with them ran, so she gets to live.”

Mac took a sip of the beer just to do something while he thought about what to say. “They were at the protest?”

Roger shook his head violently. “No! They went down there to meet some friends at the Mexican restaurant and have dinner and…they were fucking leaving! They weren’t involved at all! Those—”

Mac interrupted, “They get anybody for it?”

Roger spit behind the bar. “Hell no. Black helmet, black jacket, black fucking jeans, black fucking mask. That’s…a hundred or so of them.” He threw out his arms. “Pick one, any one. Of course APD ain’t doin’ shit as usual. They are investigating.”

“How was Mindy blinded,” Mac asked calmly.

“She said…I went and saw her yesterday, she said some dude came up and started harassing them about wanting them to say some shit, and when they wouldn’t some other dude stuck a laser in her face and shined it in her eyes before she could get her hands up. She felt Lissa, or at least she thought it was Lissa pulling on her to try to get her away, and she heard a crack, and the next thing she knew, she was on the ground.” He shook his head and said quietly, “She doesn’t know Lissa is dead. I…couldn’t tell her.” Tears rolled down his face.

Mac said quietly, “Time to put an end to this shit.”

“What?”

“Nothing, I was…mumbling to myself.”

“You want your usual? Sliced brisket plate?”

“Sure.”

***

Friday morning, Mac went in early and spent the time locating Professor Hue’s office, noting the stickers and various paraphernalia covering his door. He checked the doors on either side and across the hall and found two others with the same Antifa sentiments, Professors Long and Foster. Noting their names, he headed off to class.

His meeting with Professor Engle over his proposed dissertation in the fall had been rather heated, with the professor saying it was too complicated and he’d never get it completed, and Mac saying he knew he could complete it within a year. They finally agreed on a smaller study and the agreed title was ‘The Phonolic Inventory of Arabic compared with Najdi Arabic and Bareqi Arabic and the Rule Set for Sound Interactions.’ He was finally admitted to the professor’s office and said, “Morning, Doc.”

Engle leaned back in his swivel chair, crossing his arms over his chest. “What’s the problem today, Mr. McCampbell?”

Mac laughed. “No problems, Doc.” He pulled out a CD, and almost bound five hundred pages. Plopping them on the desk he said, “Here’s my thesis. Done. Finished.”

Engle goggled up at him. “Finished?” He squawked. “How can you possibly be finished? You’ve only…” He reached across the desk and picked it up with some difficulty, then looked up.

“I’m sure y’all will find some things that I need to fix or clarify, but I wanted to give you plenty of time for that. I’m planning on being gone by December. Is there anything else, Sir? I do need to go to class.”

“Uh…um…no.”

Mac spent the next hour of the class on Middle Eastern history reviewing the take from Stingray and plotting the phones on Google maps. Interesting…three…controllers in a single location, two blocks back at the edge of the district, four lookouts scattered two blocks further out on the main streets…warning for cops? Probably. And one, no, two moving up and down sixth. Those must be the front managers. I need to see if the data from last Friday night is still on the system. Once an intel geek, always an intel geek. He closed the file when the professor started talking about the upcoming test and quickly took notes on that.

Eight hours later, he sat in the same parking lot, cursing as he pulled the take from the Stingray and saw that it only had two days’ worth of data. He headed back to campus, parked at the library, and used their connectivity to connect to the dark web. Six of the phone numbers came up as probable burner phones, but surprise of surprises, two of the co-located phones were listed to Long and Foster. Now who’s the third with the burner phone? Since he was already connected he checked some of the mil sites, and saw another message in one of the groups from FoG about intercepts of plans for massive protests on the first of April. Who the hell is that. I…know that style! Agency or ODA? Or…Nah…he wouldn’t be that stupid, or would he?

He backtracked the IP address and sent a plain text- GHOSTRIDER REQ U COME UP RED. He quickly logged off and went back to his apartment, looked in the fridge and settled for a tuna fish sandwich on the two heels of bread he had left. He drank the last beer in the fridge with it and vowed to go to the store tomorrow.

Comments

Another short… — 61 Comments

  1. Great read. Hope the muse continues to favor you.

    Mindy changes to Mandy and back to Mindy.

  2. Yeah, this story is right out of headlines. Its a tale that needs to be told

  3. Oh this is going to be good… and you are quite right. Once intel, always intel. DOL

  4. Like Michael, I’d pay to read this and happily.

    Two questions. Should ‘Wahhabi imam’s goala’ be ‘Wahhabi imam’s goals’?
    and
    Should ‘almost bound five hundred pages.’ be ‘almost five hundred bound pages.’?

  5. You win. Where’s the book to go with this? Is it up on Amazon yet?

  6. I’ll buy it. You really do have your finger on the pulse. “… some other shit.” Indeed, didn’t we all?

  7. Jim,
    Now you’ve done it. Please sit down, continue work on this storyline and then the Muse loose! This story will find an appreciative audience and should turn some pfennigs for adult beverages!

    Loose the Muse is my new motto.

  8. All- Thanks and once again you’ve caught my errors, for which I thank you… sigh… I REALLY need to edit before I post. Thank you. Looking at something around 10-12K words.

    Posted from my iPhone.

  9. “He backtracked the IP address”
    What does backtracking the IP address get him that he needs? It might get him a location, but it would not be helpful in sending a message. For that he would need an instant messaging address.

  10. Hey Old NFO;

    I like the direction of the muse and I am surprised that the protest ain’t going on May day since that day means a lot to the communist pinko bastards. I can see your character snatching those professor bastards because I am sure that those professors are the brains behind the local antifa/BLM cell in the area and they use the university as a fertile breeding ground to grow new shitheads and hide in the background as their new soldiers go out and cause mayhem “for the cause. I really the direction of the Muse 🙂 Lawdog done good inspiring you.

  11. Well… I can see this coming. And when my wife was doing her Masters thesis, the profs were all watermelons of the first ordrer.

    As to who the mystery leader is, gee, I wonder of the three named profs, of which only one doesn’t have a personal, identified phone, is the one with the burner?

    For the poop my wife went through, please wax the profs. Think of the children.

    Very good story. Between this and EatonRapidJoe’s latest storyline about standing up to the rioters, I’ve got some good doom pron to read!

    MOAR!!!

    And, yes, it’s sad that our country has come to this point. I figured it was Austin, but it could be Dallas or Houston. So many big cities in Texas are playing for the other team now. Sad, very sad.

    • People figure a Red state is like that all over, but the population centers seem to gather a lot of suburban born millenials, illegal alien population and other minorities (who like the ‘freebies’ provided by larger cities). Dallas, San Antonio, Houston, Laredo, McAllen, Austin and other larger populated areas are mainly Blue towns.

    • By inference, it is an electronic snooper designed to record cell phone activity within a certain area.

      Probably developed during the 2nd GulfWar or Trashcanistan for to intercept local cell calls and develop pattern intel.

      Which our vet is doing.

    • I’ve heard of it; as far as I know, it mimics a cell tower (used by law enforcement and the usual 3 letter agencies), but keeps a record of the traffic as it goes through. FWIW, here’s the wiki: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Stingray_phone_tracker

      Fascinating story; depending on one’s reading habits, it sounds awfully close to real life, at least as far as the red&black crowd operate.

      I hope that a sequel to CalExit isn’t a non-fiction volume entitled OrExit. Please, Lord!

  12. The classroom scene is… synthetic. Granted, the need to establish Mac’s identity and credentials as a gumshoe is fulfilled neatly and thriftily, but to have such a confrontation come so late in the semester knocked me out of the story and into critic mode.
    Jus’ sayin’.

  13. The snippet reads like a Gray Wolf is shaking off slumber, checking the bad leg, and getting ready to hunt. Good start, almost too real. Matches too well with advice I gave to youngsters in past weeks.

  14. Excellent teaser.

    Two possible errors and one clunky phrasing.

    ****

    ‘Mack raised his
    hand languidly,’

    ‘Mac ‘ ?

    ****

    ‘Didn’t we all do that at one point?” he swiped’ —
    ‘He swiped’ ?

    ****

    ‘He reached across the desk and picked it up’

    ‘picked up the bound pages’ ??

    *-*-*-*

  15. Me likey. I can haz moar story, pleez?

    Naturally, this bears no relation to the real world, and is for entertainment purposes only.

  16. Recent read of Eaton Rapid Joe very similar but because of past mil/ret I enjoy yours more. I always wonder about the boys that have gone over and tried to go back to school. Also how many ended up with antics. Lots of smart young people with a lot of anger.

  17. Good writin’, ONFO. A bit hard to read: anger interferes with reading.

    “Phenolics” should be “Phonetics”, I suspect.

    Please, please, let Mac kill a few or several who deserve it.

    “Strong language”. Where? Former E-6 Navy here 🙂

  18. The Stingray is an intel agency developed tool which mimics and replaces a cell tower, causing all phones in its’ area to link to it to make calls or texts.
    It is a Man in the Middle attack.
    Good start to a story, but … maybe better if Mac recalls the “I was there and saw it” conversation from the beginning of the semester, which is why he has an attitude about that Prof
    This is definetely someone waking the wolf.
    I knew a man once, forgotten his name, who told me that he had “put his rifle in the attic, and hoped that no one would ever make him take it down again.”
    Mac is obviously good field intel and ELINT, but he would not have gotten that good without strategic awareness as well.
    He could start by fixing a local problem, but he woukd quickly become aware that he is stamping out swarming ants, and that he and others need to findva strategic solution.
    This could look at who directly benefits from the riots, who stratecically benefits from them, (possibly a foreign country?), and who is tossing money tobthe crocodiles, hoping to be eaten last.
    I see Ma as more Monte Cristo than Mack Bolan, though lifting some inspiration from Ringos’ “Kildar” might be fun.
    John in Indy

  19. You really do a good job of setting a hook. Don’t want to wait for it, want to read it all now!
    I’ve been afraid this was where we were headed for 45 years, but hoped I was wrong. Unfortunately, looks like I was right.

  20. Another thought on a parallel work is Ringos’ “State of Rebellion”, in the way the characters there are forced by conscience and circumstance to become rebels.
    Thanks, John

  21. John- I did fix that. Yes, that is the ‘attitude’ I’m going for.

    Frank- Thanks and agreed.

  22. All- Just noticed my earlier comment didn’t post. Thanks for the corrections, all are made. And thanks for the kind words!

    Posted from my iPhone.

  23. Excellent!! More of this would be wonderful, even if it’s closer to reality than we’d like. All the errors I saw have already been addressed.
    Thank you, Lawdog! ..and thank you, Old NFO, for listening to both of your “encouragers”.

  24. I’m unable to locate Ringos’ “State of Rebellion”. Is it published under another title, please?

    • I’m not getting a twinge of recognition from that title, could you give a mini synopsis please?

    • Tom Kratman did A State of Disobedience. Could it be that one?

  25. Great story! I want to read more.

    I am more than willing to help you do research on bars in Austin if you pay for the plane ticket.

    -Joe

  26. All- Thanks. Um…ERJ, I’ll…I’ve done my research already… 😉

    Posted from my iPhone.

  27. So far it’s a good read. It has definitely piqued my interest.

    All of the grammar and spelling errors that I noticed have been addressed. However, I must repeat: Acronyms! Not everyone has a military/intel background so if you must use an acronym you should spell it out at least once so folks won’t be thinking “What in hell is an… (FoG or APD or even a PTSD?)

    I know what a “Stingray” is, but as was pointed out, a lot of your readers won’t know. A short paragraph explaining it would go a long way.

    The hook has been set. I can hardly wait for the finished product. I just hope real-world events don’t render the tale obsolete.

  28. Yes, brain weasels got it.
    The book was State of Disobedience by Kratman

  29. Sounds a little like “Absolved”. Would love to see the rest of it, would even buy it on kindle. Scary and very topical.

  30. All- Finished (at least the rough), a little under 13K words. I’ll go clean up the acronym issues.

  31. Not a CD, a thumb drive. And he tells the prof, “This should be about 500 bound pages.”

  32. I’ve been retired 20 years now (!), but so far as I know, it would either be “First Batt” or “First OF THE Seventy-Fifth”.

  33. Drang- Fixed… Navy, not Army, so I got ‘corrected’ by multiple people… Sigh 🙂