Comments and recommendations always appreciated. Nicole poked Fargo’s foot and stepped back as he went still, then immediately eeled out of bed and slowly stood. She held out the bulb of coffee and said softly, “Forty segs until the driver … Continue reading
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Readers, and ‘others’… Y’all can read a LOT faster than we can write, which is a given. A lot of folks will read a 90,000 word novel in 3-6 hours. However, writers work at different ‘speeds’ if you will. I … Continue reading
Comments and recommendations appreciated as always! The conference room was almost full when Fargo walked in carrying a cup of coffee. “Okay, let’s get this started.” Everyone grabbed a seat and Fargo added, “Around the room as usual. Colonel Keads, … Continue reading
As always, comments and recommendations appreciated. For this one, is there too much tell and not enough show, also does the opening make you want to read further??? Chapter 1 Five years later… Fargo, a little more gray in his … Continue reading
Since everybody wants Rimworld… Comments and recommendations appreciated as always! The doorbell rang and Fargo looked up. “Who the hell?” He glanced at Nicole, who was trying to get Amy and Alan to eat their lunch and not throw it … Continue reading
Fresh off the computer. My question is, enough detail to ‘get’ what is happening? Or do I need to add more explanation? VF-211’s third launch of the day recovered aboard the USS Bon Homme Richard, and the grizzled maintenance master … Continue reading
Still playing with this one… Comments/recommendations appreciated! Morgan stowed his sniper rifle in its proper place in the armory rack, scratched an itch in his beard, picked up the debris from the rifle cleaning, and dropped it in the burn … Continue reading
Grumble… I truly hate it when the muse goes off on a drunken wander… Comments? Recommendations? Bueller??? Morgan racked his rifle in its proper place, scratched an itch in his beard, picked up the debris from the rifle cleaning, and … Continue reading
You are either bored, or need a laugh… I was the guest this week on Writer Dojo. HERE is the link to their site, with the options to listen to the podcast. We talked primarily about writing, education of writers, … Continue reading
This is ‘my’ approach to writing short stories, take it for what it’s worth… e.g. $0… Seven little items I use… A character In context (e.g. what genre) With a problem Try/fail cycle by the character (fail) Try/fail cycle by … Continue reading