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The usual caveats apply. Comments/recommendations appreciated. As a reminder, Ton’Skel is still learning ‘earth’ words and speech cadence. Chapter “Jace?” “Yes?” “Is the Hyderabad here? If so, can I borrow a shuttle? I need to go hunt some Silverbacks down … Continue reading

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A redo on this one after some input from various points of view. I ‘think’ I’ve got it cleaned up and a bit more readable… Comments/recommendations appreciated as always. Chapter Ton’Skel was morose and listless for the next two days, … Continue reading

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Usual caveats, comments and recommendations appreciated! Up to a little over 40k words, so getting close to half way done! Chapter Ton’Skel was morose and listless for the next two days, sometimes coming out of his room to watch more … Continue reading

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Another snippet. At least I read over this one before I’m posting it… Not that it will necessarily help! 🙂 Comments/recommendations always appreciated! Chapter Lal cornered Fargo and Nicole as they were leaving. “Tyag wants to stay with us one … Continue reading

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About a third of the way done. Hot off the computer screen, but at least I read it this time (for all the good that does).  Comments and recommendations appreciated as always! Chapter Fargo slumped in the seat of the … Continue reading

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Straight off the screen… Comments and recommendations appreciated as always! Edit- Okay, first round of comments fixed… Sigh… I ‘knew’ what I was trying to say, it just didn’t make it to ‘paper’… Grrr… Chapter Colonel Keads and Senior Sergeant … Continue reading

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Gah… Figures, I was gone this morning and the scheduler didn’t… Sorry! As always, the usual caveats apply. Comments/recommendations appreciated! Edit- I ‘think’ I’ve fixed what everyone found… I think… Chapter The colonel and Fargo sat in the office as … Continue reading

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The usual caveats- Comments/recommendations appreciated! Chapter Boykin touched down gently at the GalPat compound at White Beach just before thirteen. Fargo got up as she said, “Ramp going down. You have people meeting you.” He picked up his bag and … Continue reading

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The usual caveats apply… Comments/recommendations appreciated!  Chapter 2 Colonel Keads lounged across two of the seats in the cargo bay as they took off from Rushing River. “Major Santos is a logistics type. He’s been on back to back field … Continue reading

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The muse wanted me to get this down, so… Comments/recommendations appreciated, as always! Chapter 1   Ethan Fargo’s wrist comp went off with his alert tone, startling Canis and Cattus as they lay on the porch sunning themselves and luxuriating … Continue reading